I -really- like this game and it's setup. The setting is nice and the renders are really well done. Jade is an expressive MC, especially for a RENPY based VN using 3d models. You don't really see that much care and detail thrown into the characters, but with these I'm seeing diverse body types and facial features.
An extremely angry comment that's genuinely happy to see an ebony badass taking an MC role (we surprisingly dont see that a lot on itch.io)
One thing tho. It is really hard to get into the story with the MASSIVE info dumb at the beginning with her literally just standing there. I get that her being in her own head is part of her character, but you get that pretty quick. Could be better intersplicing with a bar-goer's comments or a non-essential choice the player could make to keep their attention. For example maybe before she goes into the big fight with her mom a QTE happens where ya gotta dodge a bottle from the patrons that are playing whatever game is clearly visible. That could then lead to the swaft of italicized dialogue.
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how to get previous chapters? Or, are they included in the same packet?
Whole game is available
I -really- like this game and it's setup. The setting is nice and the renders are really well done. Jade is an expressive MC, especially for a RENPY based VN using 3d models. You don't really see that much care and detail thrown into the characters, but with these I'm seeing diverse body types and facial features.
Good job so far! Looking forward to more!
An extremely angry comment that's genuinely happy to see an ebony badass taking an MC role (we surprisingly dont see that a lot on itch.io)
One thing tho. It is really hard to get into the story with the MASSIVE info dumb at the beginning with her literally just standing there. I get that her being in her own head is part of her character, but you get that pretty quick. Could be better intersplicing with a bar-goer's comments or a non-essential choice the player could make to keep their attention. For example maybe before she goes into the big fight with her mom a QTE happens where ya gotta dodge a bottle from the patrons that are playing whatever game is clearly visible. That could then lead to the swaft of italicized dialogue.
An other angry comment, but this time with love for the game!
VERY ANGRY COMMENT 😠